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How To Save A Life.

Chapter One

"She's a dwelling place for deee-moonnnns!" M. Shadows sang. The crowd was cheering loud and proud. Who wouldn't be proud to be a deathbat guy or girl? This was my first Avenged Sevenfold concert. I'd also just recently moved to Huntington Beach. I had to get away from it all, and by "it all" I mean Ohio. It was so boring there. Even the name! Oh-hio. It sounds like somebody's yawning or something. Anyway, I've been here about a month and I absolutley love it. Just walking into a place that Avenged Sevenfold might have been gives me chills. Good chills, i mean, I freaking LOVE them! Ever since waking the fallen came out in 2003 I haven't stopped loving them.

I was daydreaming and headbanging to the music when suddenly, a guy bumped into me.
"Heeeeeeeeyyyyyy. What's your name?" He asked, trying to sound attractive.
"Heeeeeeeeeyyyy. None of your damn business." I said, trying to scoot away from him. It was hard to get around the hundreds of fans surrounding me. I found a free spot and went back to watching. Someone started poking my back, take a wild guess who it was? I tried to ignore him, but then his touching me started to escalate. He started out just little pokes on my back, trying to annoy me much like a six year old. Then he began to slide his hands down to my hips and I turned around and nearly punched him out, but he grabbed my hand mid-swing.
"Just what do you think you're doing?" He asked with an evil looking smirk.
"Getting the hell away from you!" I shouted, trying to free myself from his tight grasp. "Fucking let go!" I shouted.
"Not today, you're coming with me." He said, starting to take me back further and deeper into the crowd. I started out front row, and now thanks to him i was around row five or six, still pretty close to the stage. I started to scream as loud as a could, and being a girl, it sounded like something out of a horror movie.
"Get the hell off of her." A guy said. Finally! Some help around here. I turned around to see who my savior was, and I was shocked. It was M. freaking Shadows. Behind him was The Rev and Zacky. They looked like they were really ready to fuck shit up if necessary.
"Excuse me." The Rev said. "You must not have heard him the first time,so let me make this clear as possible." The Rev towered over the guy.
"You-You're The Rev! I'm a huge fan!" The guy stammered
"No, you're obviously not. No real fan would try to do this to an innocent girl, at our freaking concert." Zacky stated.
"Now what I want you to do, is to get the hell out of here. And never come back." M. Shadows said, eyeing the guy up and down.
He finally released me from his death tight grip and I breathed a huge sigh of relief.
"You want her?" He asked, smirking again. "Take her!" He shouted, throwing me to the ground.
I grunted from the pain. A hand was offered to me and I took it, it was Zacky's. I gazed into his deep green eyes and zoned out for a second. He asked,
"Are you okay? Why don't you wait backstage until the concert is over. Shadows will take you back there, won't ya Shadz?" M. Shadows nodded, smiled, and took my hand and brought me backstage. Once we were back there, he gestured to one of the three couches that were in a room and I took that as an invite to sit. He went back out to the stage and said with a smile,
"Boy, Jimbo. That guy was a real nightmare, wasn't he?" The Rev replied with,
"Indeed he was!" And with that, they finishd the concert. I sat backstage and layed on the couch just listening. They played Nightmare, Chapter Four, Bat Country, Unholy Confessions, MIA, Betrayed, and ended the show with a beautiful rendition of Seize The Day.
After the concert, the guys packed up their instruments and I thought they'd forgotten about me. But as if all at once, I was surrounded by five of my favorite guys ever. The Rev sat on my right on the couch, M. Shadows on my left. Brian and Zacky shared a couch and Johnny just stood.
"How you feeling?" Zacky asked, sounding legitimately concerned.
"I'm fine i guess." I said. I began to giggle, they all looked confused.
"I'm sorry." I said, "It's just you guys are Aveneged freaking Sevefold. So in reality, I'm feeling pretty a-freaking-mazing. Zacky Vengeance just spoke to me!" I was fangirling, and the guys found it hilarious. "In all seriousness though, thanks for saving my life, guys."
"No problem." Synyster Gates said with a smile.
"Syn, you weren't even there!" The Rev pointed out, laughing.
"But you're welcome, it's no trouble little miss." M. Shadows said. I couldn't help but turn red in the face and giggle. "Is this your first Avenged Sevenfold concert?" He asked.
"Yup." I replied
"Well," Johnny began, "Don't let a creep like that discourage you from coming to more. Take it as a compliment, you're freaking adorable and he just wanted to get with you!" We all laughed.
"So which one of us is your favorite?" Zacky asked, smiling.
"Oh come on, don't make me pick." I replied shyly.
"Oh, we're gonna make you pick. And we're not leaving until you do."The Rev said smirking.
"Oh, God Rev, you're even funnier in person!" I said, laughing.
"So he's your favorite?" M. Shadows asked.
"Well, I do love him. And you, and Zacky, and Syn, and even Johnny!" I replied.
"Wait, the fans like Johnny? Why...?" Synester Gates asked sarcastically. We all laughed.
"Seriously, come on! Which one of us is your favorite?" Zacky asked. "Come on, we're not gonna get offenededdd."
I thought for a minute, then said, "Okay..you know I love you all, right?" I asked. They all nodded. "But I did like Synyster Gates and Zacky first. I have like, a guitargasm whenever they play. And when M. Shadows sings, and when Johnny plays and when the Rev plays." I said fast, smiling. Zacky and Syn smiled.
"Woo! I'm the favorite, once again." Synyster Gates said, smiling at me. I flushed red and he laughed.
"Hey, you guys want to go to Johnny's Bar for a drink to celebrate the fact that this girl didn't like, die at our concert?" M. Shadows asked. I sulked. I guess my dream of hanging with Avenged Sevenfold was coming to an end.
"Why you look so sad?" Zacky asked. "Aren't you coming?"
My face lit up. I get to go have drinks with Avenged Sevenfold. At Johnny's Bar. Talk about living the dream, literally!

Notes

if it sucks, i'm sorry xD this is my first atempt to write a fan-fic. hopefully it gets better xD

Comments

@SynysterSevenfold

thanks.. <3

DaniVengeance DaniVengeance
5/4/14

@DaniVengeance
i have!
here's a link :3

http://www.avengedsevenfoldfanfiction.com/Story/44609/How-To-Save-A-Life-Re-Write/

post the REWRITTEN ONE!!!

DaniVengeance DaniVengeance
5/4/14

If you are happy with how you wrote it, totally post it! Ima def read it when and if ya do! :D

Yes!!!

mrsmshadz mrsmshadz
5/4/14