Seize the Day - Comments

I can't wait for a sequel.

That was wonderful! I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen on tour! I’m so glad you decided to do a sequel!

Oh poor Bailey and Zacky. I love those two together so much. I hope you decide on a sequel, I’m not ready for this story to end:

I’ve been a relatively silent reader with this story but I justed wanted to say how much I’m loving it! I love the dynamic between Zacky and Bailey...I just hope she and Johnny can fix their relationship. Keep it up and i can’t wait for more!

I'm so in love with this story ♥♥♥

Lol! Cool to see that you're responding to the story. I know I update too much, but I finished this story years ago so I'm just posting it for fun.
I also didn't realize when I wrote it that I had made Johnny so awful in the beginning lmfao! I promise it gets better with Johnny and you'll like how that's handled. ^-^
I also hope the formatting is better, I've been having issues uploading it'll look good when I put it in the submission box but then when it's posted it goes weird and runs everything together - there are no more paragraphs... I'm starting to get it looking better but lets be serious, I have no idea what I'm doing. ^-^

I’m offline for a few days only to come back to a slew of updates! Zack’s interactions with the wee little one make me laugh, but I love how he and Bailey have grown so close. I could also smack Johnny for being such an oblivious, drunken, fool and I really hope that someone puts him in his place soon. I think I gave an actual verbal cheer when Pa finally spoke up and defended his children from their intrusive relatives. It’s about damn time!

I think this story is super cute so far, I'm interested in the storyline particularly since it isn't a typical "move to Huntington Beach" or "went to high school with the band" story. The contrast between Bailey's life and Zack's is so stark, I'm really intrigued to see how you tie it all together.

I would, however, recommend taking a little more time with each update to focus on formatting. Ensuring that each new paragraph or quotation starts with a full line between the last line of text will make reading each chapter a little easier.

Subscribed, and awaiting your next chapter! :)