Shattered Heart - Comments

Looks like Brian got Mary one hell of an expensive ring--to let everyone know she's no longer on the market. And, it came as a big shocker for nearly everyone when he had to tell the guys that Mary's his fiancee.

It was definitely funny how Mary got Jimmy back.. by making those cupcakes--and slipping something in them without anyone watching. I also find it kinda funny on how Zacky and Matt are looking at Brian and Mary... whether it's fear--or whether to laugh or not.

Loved it. :)

Poor Johnny. That prank was hilarious! XD I wonder who Mary's gonna get next?

Looks like Brian proposed to her--and told her she's pregnant too. It's a good thing she loves him, because it looks like she took the news well. And, accepted his proposal too.

Loved it. :)

I wonder when Brian's gonna work up the courage to tell Mary that she's pregnant? And, it looks like everyone (while except Jimmy and Johnny) are angry that Brian and Mary are having sex..and they aren't.

And now everyone's scared that Mary and Brian's getting ready to prank them (all because he told her everything)--and that the first victim is Johnny. I think it'll be a bit interesting to see what happens to Johnny(after the first prank is over).

Love it. :)

(Chapter 5 Review)

Looks like whatever Mary did to get Brian to wake up worked. XD I think it's sweet how she's treating that carving he did on his arm (that probably almost killed him). Ooh, it looks like Mary finally heard what Brian had to say about that bet--and must be planning some payback for what the guys did.

I do find it funny that Jimmy did fart in the room where Brian and Mary were--while she was trying to get him to wake up.. Can't believe that Matt is not letting anyone have sex on the bus because Elle isn't letting him have any with her...

Love it. :)

(Chapter 4 Review)

Well... looks like Brian finally got Mary to listen to him---and in a twisted way too. And by cutting her name into his skin. And, it looks like it got her to break down and finally admit that she loves him.

And--oh, crap--it looks like Brian almost died too.. Which Mary probably wouldn't have forgiven herself for if he had died.

Loved it. :)

Damn... I don't get why Mary won't listen to Brian. He's telling her the actual truth when he tells her he loves her (and about the bet). The only thing he should've done is told her that he "wasn't really drunk" when he told her those three words.


And--he shouldn't have pushed Mary away from him after having sex with Mary (even if it was a bet). It was just wrong of Brian to do that--even after he said "I love you".

Love it. :)

Looks like Mary's high off morphine--and is telling Brian how she feels about him. :) And, it's funny how she keeps grabbing at the guys crotches--thinking their "purple death bats"... 'cuz she's so high.

And it looks like Mary could be pregnant.. because it looks like one of the prescriptions the doctor handed Brian was the prenatal vitamins.

Love it. :)

(Review for Chapter 1)

Interesting. :) Even though the bet went WAY too far, and even though they just had a fight--it looks like Mary doesn't really hate him at all. That is, even though it may seem like she does.

It does make me wonder will she try and get out of contract?

Love it. :)

Update soon please.