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Thank you! I have been told and I haven't gone over this, so I think from now on i'ts me, I'm sorry! I don't mean to switch I just let my writing take over and I don't really pay attention to it and I know that I should! Thank you!@Nia_Flores
What an asshole!!! Seriously!!! & that's coming from a girl that LOVES Brian, no matter what!!!
Just a small thing: You tend to switch POV's. You tend to go from 'she' to 'me'. I don't know if that's on purpose or not, but just wanted to let you know. It's one of my pet peeves!!! I'm sorry if I offended you.
Hope you update soon!!!
Just a small thing: You tend to switch POV's. You tend to go from 'she' to 'me'. I don't know if that's on purpose or not, but just wanted to let you know. It's one of my pet peeves!!! I'm sorry if I offended you.
Hope you update soon!!!
Poor little thing! I'm so glad Steph was there to help the doggy & save the day!
I'm gonna be honest... this story has me hooked! I think it has everything to be a great story!!! I can't wait for the next update!
I'm gonna be honest... this story has me hooked! I think it has everything to be a great story!!! I can't wait for the next update!
Aw.. I feel bad for her.. Brian is such an ass! Her friend is really sweet! Can't wait to read what happens next.
11/16/12