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A little piece of heaven - Comments

@DaphneG
Thats good to know!! I'll be here ;)

Leyla.lp Leyla.lp
2/18/16

@Leyla.lp
Thanks for that awesome comment! I'm really glad you took your time and read this:D
And maybe some time in the future, I might write more tragedies like this and I promise they'll be longer:)

DaphneG DaphneG
2/17/16

Oh god! Im sorry, i ended up reading your other coments for curiosity and you said its the first time you try this angst and tragedy genre??? :O
Cant freaking believe you are that good!!! It gave me the chills all the way, even though i think its too short, wish i had more of this cause i completely love tragedy and drama, u know that ;)

You are pretty good in describing the feelings and landscapes, i loved that. And i could totally imagine bri having that grave talk with jim, something he must have definitely done really.
Congrats and thanksr for writing this ;)
And if i were you, i would invest more on that drama thing. You r good on that girl! XD

Leyla.lp Leyla.lp
2/17/16

@KCAKE210
Thanks again!

DaphneG DaphneG
2/11/16

@DaphneG
Yes it was a good ending!

Laterdegates Laterdegates
2/11/16

@KCAKE210
Shit, you're crying again! Please don't! I know it's a really sad story but the ending was good hopefully:D
Thanks for the comment and happy birthday!

DaphneG DaphneG
2/11/16

AHHHH I CRI NOW THIS IS SO SAD YET SO BEAUTIFUL AHHH THE BAD THING IS TODAY IS MY BIRTHDAY I KNOW HIS BIRTHDAY WAS YESTERDAY BUT HAPPY B DAY JIMMY ! GR8 STORY

Laterdegates Laterdegates
2/10/16

@Kimmie
Awwh, thank you! This is the first time I've tried writing something like this.

DaphneG DaphneG
2/10/16

Ohh this is so sad :(

Kimmie Kimmie
2/9/16