I Can Be Your Everything - Comments

@LadyRevenge
I know right the guy is clearly a jerk :P so pleased you are enjoying this! You help motivate me to keep writing!

I've caught up with the story and this is amazing. She finally submitted to him. Jeez, I know all he was trying to do was act as an alpha but wow that's just messed up and crazy how he treated her when she didn't want to submit to him.

@Custer


You're welcome. :)

@megan20089
Somewhere far far away! Just posted the new chapter it shall explain all! Thank you very very much for commenting!

I wonder what this mystery man and Val mean when they say that Dave McLaren isn't Effie's father? Not to mention, who is this mystery man--and where is he taking her?

Love it. :)

Gasp!!! I want more

Love this chapter. Crap, it seems that Steph has escaped. Hate when this kind of...creature wants to start trouble. Brian seems to come on a bit strong on Jen. Annoying her? really now? The guy needs to learn to be a gentleman and take her on a date first lol. So cute on the chemistry between Zacky and Effie.

Love love love can't wait for the next one :)

I love this story so freaking much! Please update it soon!

@ForAVengence
@LadyRevenge
thank you so much! I'm so glad you guys are enjoying it x

I'm in love

Okay I'm officially in love with this story now lol. Effie and Zacky are so cute together. Who knew Brian would possibly have found something with Jen. Following her around like a lost puppy? too adorable.

@LadyRevenge
Aww thank you:) I uploaded the rest of the chapters and I'm in the process of writing anoher.

Wow I'm liking this story so far. ^_^

Seems interesting