Broken - Comments

This was interesting. It left me hooked to see what happens next.

This was fairly interesting, though I did feel that some parts were a little rushed. There were a few typos that are a little too easily spotted.

But the story sounds really interesting, and I think it's great that this is just a small taste of what you're going to turn into something bigger. I love mob stories, and I obviously love Avenged Sevenfold, so I can't wait to see what you do with this.

@zackystheman4me

Haha yay! Lol, but thank you :) <3

@SevenfoldGirl_ sweet thank you... I can't wait to read your other stuff. You have a new groupie lol

@zackystheman4me

I just copied it from my mibba.. Otherwise I believe its t globe with a chain under =) Just mark one word and then click the globe (next to the quote symbol)

You welcome... I have a question how do you place links in the text?

@zackystheman4me

Aw thank you :')

I love this you are an awesome writer.