Day of Reckoning - Comments

Holy shit!!!

Loved the update! And I can't wait to hear more about the other gangs.. :D

FUCK YAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! GHOST IS SO BADASS!!!!!! I LOVE HIM! \m/
I also found it funny how the end of the chapter said "thank god it was over".. Then the authors note-"but it's not over yet." XD
And I can see what you mean about the toll it takes to lose the love of your life.

I started to relax a little.... But then I remembered the fucking Drug Lord... Can't those Druggies ever gives us naturally fucked up people a break?!?! I mean seriously!! It is completely shallow, and I'm gonna have to do the one thing I hate doing..... Waiting!

Lol I'm thinking of Matt suffering a moment of remorse somewhere along the line... sure, he's turned into a monster but the whole purpose of my 2 stories is to show what COULD happen when you take a man's love of his life away from him. I kinda based Matt's persona in these fanfics on Clyde Shelton off Law Abiding Citizen.

"Ya know, ever since Val died, I always wondered what she was like in bed..." Oh man...that line fucked my brains dude.. Matt has finally lost all respect from me!
But like usual, I'm dying for more!

Oh Shit! Johnny my boy you need to get the fuck out of there man!! And I swear to God if anything happens to that baby, I'm gonna lose my shit!! And it wont be pleasant for anyone. I mean COME ON!! Don't take it out on the kid!!!

Oh shit... Johnny's got a problem!

and cheers... as usual, I appreciate the feedback

next one comes tomorrow when I wake up

There's so much I could comment about!
First off, amazing chapter. The way you write is so detail and amazing.
Secondly, Guerra has quite the damn offer for Arin and Matt. I'm curious to see how their relationship turns out.
Cant wait for more!

yeah I know... I was gonna make it Arin but he hasn't had enough storytime... thought in the end that it was Syn who had to go

:( poor Syn. otherwise great chapter..

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Poor Syn... Sexy, sexy Syn... nice chapter too.

you'll see... thinking of adding a twist or two...

loving it.. wonder what's gonna happen now..

FUCK!!!!!! I love it already! Lots of action, I thought for sure they'd take a hostage but I guess not..

*"popos" is a slang term for the police

*"popos" is a slang term for the police